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So, I've started work on a novel with a premise that has been floating around in my mind for a while. So far, I've written about 30 pages, but decided to test the waters with the first two and a half chapters. Read, enjoy, and criticize. Please keep in mind that some of the dialogue is placeholder, and will be re-written.





Read it when it's published.

More like "if"

I like it a lot so far, keep working on it.

Thanks.

Do you have any criticisms?

Not really, just keep going in the direction you are going now.