Writing a story...

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Rewjeo
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Writing a story...

Post by Rewjeo » Sun Jun 24, 2012 1:54 pm

I'm writing a story. I actually got pretty far into it (~30,000 words) over the last year, but the beginning bits were, well, not good. So I'm starting over. If anyone cares to read it, here's the start of the new draft: http://rewjeo-astorywithnoname.blogspot ... logue.html

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Re: Writing a story...

Post by Untadaike » Mon Jun 25, 2012 11:52 am

Great pacing, vivid imagery, not too much information. I didn't read all of it but I can tell that you're on the right track. Good stuff.

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Re: Writing a story...

Post by Rewjeo » Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:54 pm

Thank you! That's my favorite compliment I've gotten so far. I'd rather have someone tear apart everything I did wrong than just say "That's good!" but having someone compliment it and say what specific things I did right is pretty awesome.

And chapter 2. http://rewjeo-astorywithnoname.blogspot.com/

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