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poem(True Happiness)

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 2:22 am
by MadCatMax
{There is but only one true form of happiness. The key to true happiness can not be learnt nor taught. True happiness has no part in joy nor love. Joy is able to produce large quantities of happiness with little effort. But is easily corrupted by outside forces such as sorrow and tragedy. Love can sometimes be tougher then joy and could have more resistant to outside forces, but depends on the compassion and loyalty of an another entity. When in love you are only proletariat lacking the means of production. The ability which is key to achieve true happiness is known as ignorance. Ignorance allows the hunger of starving children to disappear. Ignorance allows the beholder to be indifferent towards politics and society. Ignorance allow the beholder not to care for economics nor policies. Ignorance allows the beholder not to care about schoolyard drama nor social status, the beholder would not be effected by any name nor taunt use to be little him for the beholder lacks the understanding to be harmed by this comments. . Ignorance allows the beholder to be free from all world issues big or small that don't conflict with his own physical needs.}

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Re: poem(True Happiness)

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 3:05 am
by Freshbite
It was a too compact set of lines. It made my eyes hurt.

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Re: poem(True Happiness)

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 5:41 am
by adwuga
MadCatMax wrote: Ignorance allow the beholder
should be "Ignorances allow the beholder."

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Re: poem(True Happiness)

Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2012 9:05 pm
by underthedeep
Freshbite wrote:It was a too compact set of lines. It made my eyes hurt.

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yep

Re: poem(True Happiness)

Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2012 9:57 pm
by Assaultman67
Basically you're saying the less you know the happier you are.

Re: poem(True Happiness)

Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2012 10:04 pm
by adwuga
Assaultman67 wrote:Basically you're saying the less you know the happier you are.
This, except that the not knowing is actually kind of evil, especially since it is willful ignorance.