the story for this has yet to be told I'd like people to post their Ideas for the story just for consideration. if your not posting a story only post constructive criticism or say that you enjoy set idea.
I have an Idea as well though it isn't very good
Turner is now working as a mercenary of justice looking for the answer to the question that was planted in his brain 7 years ago: what is the raiders master plan? and who is behind it? all along the way he is met by finding a few of his accomplices murdered in their homes all in the same way: a green-silver shiroken stuck in their backs. ontop of all this Turner's daughter is still alive. he finds out at a tavern from an ex raider that they were taking the children from their raids, leaving behind a fake meat bag that was deformed unrecognisably and selling them off at the black market. he goes searching for his daughter only to find out she is a trained assassin; the same assassin that has been murdering his clients. Slowly, a deeper more vial conspiracy comes to foot: there is something coming. and the dogs plan to cleanse the land of all other races with it. though they didn't count on one thing: a dog, the last of his clan, a world weary rabbit, and a band of misfits striking one thing into the hearts of all civil races: Rebellion. you may fill in the blanks with whatever you may please.
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Overgrowth story line thread
Re: Overgrowth story line thread
Can I write one for my almost finished otter character?
I will, and then I'll remove it if nobody wants it.
So we start out with an otter named Frank, of clan Quicktooth; he is a guard at a local city. It's not a large city, but it's big enough to be important to folk of higher status.
He is traveling home one night, and as Frank rounds a hill he beholds his house, a long dead pile of ash, obviously victim to a huge fire. He searches through the wreckage and finds nothing but the remains of sentimental treasures. Frank stumbles blearily to the woods and falls to the ground in mourning resignation. Although he had lost his home, his wife and baby boy were not there; they may have escaped!
As he rises to his feet and to investigate his new hope, he spots movement in his peripherals. Upon his approach, a butterfly rises from a flower and flits away. Frank looks around, and seeing nothing relevant heads back to the house to investigate more closely. Discovering a handful of tracks in the ash and dirt, Frank surmises that there was more than one attacker and no more than five. He wasn't much of a tracker, but he could see a set of prints that lead towards a shallow stream nearby. With new found hope and a steely cast to his eyes, Frank Quicktooth sets off to find his family.
From this point on, I don't know if I should write out the rest like a novel, or just talk about it. Hmm, maybe I should put up a fan-fiction thread about this guy.
I will, and then I'll remove it if nobody wants it.
So we start out with an otter named Frank, of clan Quicktooth; he is a guard at a local city. It's not a large city, but it's big enough to be important to folk of higher status.
He is traveling home one night, and as Frank rounds a hill he beholds his house, a long dead pile of ash, obviously victim to a huge fire. He searches through the wreckage and finds nothing but the remains of sentimental treasures. Frank stumbles blearily to the woods and falls to the ground in mourning resignation. Although he had lost his home, his wife and baby boy were not there; they may have escaped!
As he rises to his feet and to investigate his new hope, he spots movement in his peripherals. Upon his approach, a butterfly rises from a flower and flits away. Frank looks around, and seeing nothing relevant heads back to the house to investigate more closely. Discovering a handful of tracks in the ash and dirt, Frank surmises that there was more than one attacker and no more than five. He wasn't much of a tracker, but he could see a set of prints that lead towards a shallow stream nearby. With new found hope and a steely cast to his eyes, Frank Quicktooth sets off to find his family.
From this point on, I don't know if I should write out the rest like a novel, or just talk about it. Hmm, maybe I should put up a fan-fiction thread about this guy.
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Re: Overgrowth story line thread
What I´d like to know:
Has he got any special skills?
What´s his equipment?
Fighting style?(Since his clan´s name is "Quicktooth", I can imagine him specialising in fast, vicious bites or something)
Has he got any special skills?
What´s his equipment?
Fighting style?(Since his clan´s name is "Quicktooth", I can imagine him specialising in fast, vicious bites or something)
Re: Overgrowth story line thread
I'd like to see this otter when its all textured. see if you can get it on the library of meshesKorban3 wrote:Can I write one for my almost finished otter character?
Re: Overgrowth story line thread
Oh, it's already textured. It's also rigged, and has the code set up in the engine. It's currently returning a crash when it's attempted to load, so I'm going to be fixing it after I get back from MEPS. I also have a working fox character. They're on the SPF though, as they are that sort of material.