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Endoperez
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Re: Fan Art

Post by Endoperez » Wed Dec 18, 2013 12:55 pm

Ooh, nice, I like!

Your anatomy and details are both quite good. The shield's top level doesn't follow perspective, but other than that you don't have any mistakes there either. Fixing the top part of the shield should help the image's composition, the lines there would probably end up pointing towards his neck or body. Are you going to add his legs in behind the torso?You could try adding his left leg as another diagonal line that guides the eye toward the right hand and the sword, which seem to be the focal point. It might add a bit of focus into the image.

The gradient in there helps focus on the wound. I'm not sure if you added the gradient on purpose of if it's a bad scan or a photo, with that ugly color in there. The gradient works very well though, except the color. Staging a scene with that lighting would take some thinking though, I can't come up with anything ATM.

Your lines are a bit sketchy. Are you going to touch this up on a computer, perhaps color it? Or ink it? Cleaner lines would help this a lot.

I like it a lot, I think it's one of the more promising works in the thread.

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Re: Fan Art

Post by Thomason1005 » Thu Dec 19, 2013 10:12 am

@endoperez thx for the feedback, the gradient was just beacuse its a photo i made with my phone. There isnt much room for corrections as its a pen drawing but i did sth on the shield and made the left hand bigger and such stuff though. Idk what to do on the legs, ill keep it like it is i think..
maybe ill add some color (blood) but ill kepp it non digital
hmm it doesnt upload ill try again later

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Re: Fan Art

Post by Endoperez » Thu Dec 19, 2013 1:40 pm

Fuzzy, "hairy" lines make for ugly pencil drawings. Try to learn how to draw longer, cleaner strokes, it will improve your work a lot. You can't draw those clean lines if you go too slowly, so you need to practice it until the muscles more or less know the movement. You can e.g. fill an empty A4s with straight lines, or repeat a curve two dozen times, as warmup every time before you start drawing.

No need to add anything if it isn't digital. I'm doing digital art mostly, so for me it's easy to go in and add stuff and try out different options.

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Re: Fan Art

Post by RagdollZombie » Fri Dec 20, 2013 6:33 pm

A little animation i made :3
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Re: Fan Art

Post by fromkms » Mon Dec 30, 2013 10:55 am

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Re: Fan Art

Post by renamedperson » Sun Jan 05, 2014 6:59 pm

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That is just... Okay! some fanart from me this time! I am new, and I wish shinygem would come back!

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Re: Fan Art

Post by Sehiro » Tue Jan 21, 2014 3:37 pm

I can draw just drafts :s
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WOW

Post by xI_Tipton_Ix » Thu Jan 23, 2014 2:32 pm

That's awesome

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Re: Fan Art

Post by renamedperson » Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:50 pm

Inspired by Aubrey's model.
Edit: added tail XD
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Re: Fan Art

Post by naquibe » Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:53 pm

Awesome :o

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Re: Fan Art

Post by renamedperson » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:07 pm

Second piece of art that has been inspired by his model. Just a quick sketch, please forgive the ear in between the other ones
Edit: I just noticed he has slanted eyes... fixed no tail + eyes

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Re: Fan Art

Post by Phizzlygames » Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:10 pm

It is kinda simple but whatever!

It is an older drawing of mine and I have decided to work on it again to add more detail.
For the record I never used reference photos for this drawing about a year ago.
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Re: Fan Art

Post by renamedperson » Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:25 pm

NIce, I love it!

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Re: Fan Art

Post by Phizzlygames » Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:52 pm

It's one of my older drawings.
Very simple but I've decided to work on it again and make it with more detail.

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Re: Fan Art

Post by Donut Queen » Mon Jan 27, 2014 9:04 pm

I like it a lot. mwahahaha

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