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Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:30 pm
by invertin
At the end of the universe, the end of time. A dark portal will open over our world, a perfect sphere. Inside, we see only three colours- Black, Red and White. The world beyond is a nightmarish mirror of our own, completely destroyed, mixed with images of skulls and death. The portal will linger for a time, until it descends upon us with the screams of a thousand dying suns and a million dying civilizations. The portal will descend, as if it were the fist of an angry god, and it will crush our planet until we are but dust. And it will continue. Destroying every species on every world with it's dark power and it's hellishs screams, getting louder as it goes onwards to destruction.

Finally, the portal will eat the anchor at the center of the universe, and the portal will open up, expelling it's contents into our world. A shattered world of black, red and white, constantly erasing itself and remaking it's own history. The red cities and people, staring endlessly at the portal, whether or not they can really see it.

The portal will continue it's regurgitation of an alternate reality, until it eventually spits out a final, tiny red tentacle. The tentacle will feed on the miniscule, until it grows a joint, the limb will feed on the tiny, until it grows an organ, the being will feed on the small, until it grows a form, the beast will feed on the average, until it grows an eye, the demon will feed on the tall, until it grows two shattered wings, the flying death will feed on the mighty until it grows a shell, and the invunerable, incomprehencable beast will feed on reality.

Eventually, the beast will have reached it's mark. It will have devoured all. Nothing left but itself and the portal, and even that it shall devour. Finally the beast will feast upon itself in an endless loop, slowly but surely destroying itself, erasing itself within it's own impossible stomach and undoing all of creation.


And your mind will snap back into the real world, you sit up and scream, sweating and panting in fear. You awake the neighbors or your relatives, roommates perhaps. You stay up late for a while, maybe you record the dream, maybe you don't, maybe you get a snack or drink or maybe you just wander around until you forget all about it and go back to sleep.


And as you slumber, the shadow under your head twists into a dark smile as the sky breaks apart under the power of the black portal descending upon a universe that sleeps, even as it dies.

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:44 pm
by Sandurz
Neh

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:09 pm
by Chainsaw man
Not Really... It lacks body and feeling. :|
It sounds to me like a babling church going ignoranus preaching again :wink:
Only time a Feel creeped out when they go on those spewils is because there face seems happy about it, like they want it to happen, and are prepared to do evil to make it happin.

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:12 pm
by invertin
Probably seems scarier to me because I can visualize it exactly. And because it's nighttime. Oops.

I'll try again when I'm supposed to be awake.

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:23 pm
by Chainsaw man
Well, your not giving me much to feel or see in my mind. A Nightmarish mirror of this earth inside a sphere could be anything to anyone. You gotta try and get me feeling what you are feeling as best you can while writing. Keep working on it.

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:42 am
by Ac30
The crazed red freak avatar is a good start. Here's the scenario:

*Drumroll*


The crazed red phr33k attacks a woman. she dies. the end

*everyone gapes in shock at Ac30's Hollywood-worthy script*

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:03 pm
by Chainsaw man
No sarcasim ditectied...
Hollywood sux :|

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:59 am
by Ac30
What i wrote is the general standard of Hollywood films nowadays.... :|

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:44 am
by Chainsaw man
A standard we call insulting... :|

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 3:09 pm
by kehaar
Sure, why not?

What you posted sounds like an outline more than the story itself. Keep working on it, put more specific plot and characters into it, wot the hell.

That's how stuff gets written-- someone writes it! :lol:
Do it for fun, if it's fun enough, keep doing it.

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:22 pm
by invertin
Dunno how this could become a story really.
I guess I could slow down the portal, so the heroes have a time limit instead of instant doom and they have to do magical stuff to stop it. Maybe they fight monsters that fall out of it...

I'll think about it...

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:05 am
by Uberbeard
I don't like the red, black and white line. I'd like to see you try and visualize it a little more with your writing.

Re: Should I try writing horror?

Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:29 pm
by Renegade_Turner
Ac30 wrote:What i wrote is the general standard of Hollywood films nowadays.... :|
Not really, at all. What ridiculous hyperbole.