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GREAT STORY!!!

Post by The_Architect » Sat Nov 25, 2006 6:12 pm

DUDE!!! You could make a story out of that!!! IT ROCKS!!!

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Post by RhinoG » Sat Nov 25, 2006 6:45 pm

It IS a story -.-

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Post by BunnyWithStick » Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:56 am

I can't tell if he was being sarcastic or not… Crap! :P

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Post by RhinoG » Sun Nov 26, 2006 3:13 am

Oh... i didn't even fathom him being sarcastic.



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Post by invertin » Sun Nov 26, 2006 3:22 am

Part- 9 Vixen

It is in the evening, it is summer however so the sun is still up, in the distance is a forest
"Tiergan?"
"Yes?"
"Where is this camp?"
"On the south coast"
"South coast!? We started in the north how are we going to get there
alive!?"
"By being patient, as I have this whole trip"
"It's summer, we're in the desert, and that pretty much means it's hot and deadly."
Tiergan just pointed ahead
"It is a forest, we will be there soon"
Later...
They are in the forest now, it is sunset
"Tiergan we need to rest"
"No, not here"
"Why not?"
"Something is coming, I can hear it"
Invertin looked around
"I can't see anything.. Where is it?"
Tiergan pointed at a large rock
"It's behind there"
Invertin crept round the rock and was suprised to see, a female fox sitting there. She wore a skirt that looked like it was made from leaves and a sleeveless shirt that was also made of leaves. She looked at him with a smile
"Hello stranger, nice day isn't it?"
"Ummm....I guess?"
Invertin wasn't sure what to say, for the first time in a while someone other than Tiergan didn't try to kill him on sight
"What are you doing here?"
"Enjoying the forest"
Invertin raised his eyebrow (do wolves even have eybrows)
"What is your name?"
"Vixen, but rabbits call me Bladeslinger"
"Bladeslinger?"
"I get in some robes, get some knifes and kill rabbit outlaws. A rabbit saw me while I was doing this but he didn't realise I was a fox, He made up the name 'Bladeslinger'. I quite like it acutally"
"Well, I'm Invertin and my friend here.."
Invertin turned to Tiergan
"It's ok, just a fox she's friendly"
Then he turned back to Vixen
"Is Tiergan. Um.. Do you harm ordinary rabbits?"
"Only if I have too, If I killed them all they would do the same to me. I've stopped bladeslinging recently"
"Why?"
"Because rabbit outlaws are either in hiding, dead, or recently reformed."
Tiergan walked towards the rock and stared blankly into space (He doesn't use his looking if you forgot) but his ears were pointed at Vixen
"A fox? It is hard to tell with just my ears, but I can tell you are friendly"
Invertin looked at Tiergan, then back at Vixen
"Would you like to come with us to the south coast, there is a camp of wolf outlaws, and I think that with it I can take back the wolf pack"
Vixen looked slightly impatient
"I don't need to know why, just tell me where next time! Let's go, I haven't been on a journey in sometime!"
Then Tiergan, Invertin and Vixen walk off, only Vixen is running and Invertin is jogging to keep up.

To be continued...(Ending not meant to be dramatic, this is just in every part)

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Post by invertin » Mon Nov 27, 2006 4:11 pm

Part- 10 Forest of loss

"Wait.."
Tiergan stopped, it was night and they were still in the forest
"We need to split up to find the camp"
"What? We just got Vixen and you already want her gone?"
"No, it's not her. Raiders are known to prey on groups with knives in this part of the wood.
"Knives? Please I'm the master or knives."
"Vixen, can you catch a knife as it hurls towards you?"
"Of course!"
"Can you catch one that was heading fo Invertin? Or me?"
"Oh, right. I still need to get used to thinking of others."
Invertin gave her an odd look, and they seperated
Later..
Tiergan is walking along with a chick in his hand
"Your lost arent you.. I lost everything, to wolves and traitors."
He put the bird down but a hawk flew down and ate it
"The circle of life is so cruel.. But it will everthing will be set to rights, soon."
Meanwhile-to Invertin
He has a wolves tooth in his hand, it is rapped with a red ribbon, and a moon is drawn on the end.
"I may not be able to bring you back.."
He crushed the tooth in his hand
"And I'm putting that behind me."
He opened his hand and the ribbon was still there. He threw the remains of the bone on the floor and tied the band around his head.
"I will still honor your name and pack.. Father"
Later...
All three of them were at the end now. Vixen was wet, slimy and misrable.
"What happened to you?"
Vixen turned her head slowly to Invertin
"I jinxed.. Everything I said... I was poured on by rain after I said 'I wonder how the dew gets on the grass?'. Then I was attacked by loads of frogs after I said 'Atleast it can't get any worse'. Then when I said 'Atleast i'm not hurt' Some raiders attacked me!"
She took a bite out the the rabbit leg she had in her hand
"Want some?"
Invertin looked at the other leg she had and digged in.
Tiergan looked on (or faced on) and said under his breath.
"Soon, everything will be put to rights.."

To be continued..(Short, I know. And don't worry about Vixen's fight i'll add that as an extra in the next part)

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Post by invertin » Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:06 am

I can't think of anything today. I'll do something tommorow

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Post by invertin » Wed Nov 29, 2006 4:31 pm

Part- 11 Another loss

It is midday and they have come to a mountain.. The lands around it are raider camps and would be stupid to try to get past. Tiergans ears twitched
"This mountain is unstable, but this is the only way..."
Vixen ran to the cliff-side
"Come on then"
The mountain rumbled and a large boulder fell down, it knocked over a tree
"Oops.."
"be careful, if there are any loud noises then this mountain will collapse"
Later...
(For this part they are whispering)
"Invertin?"
"Yeah?"
"Do you think we should have gone round the other side, if the raiders see us they might.."
"HEY!! INTRUDERS ON THE CLIFFSIDE!!"
"Shout...."
The mountain rumbled.. The top of it collapsed and rocks rolled towards them
"Plan B... RUN!!!"
They ran across the cliff-side, the part of the mountain that Tiergan was on collapsed and Tiergan fell with it.
"TIERGAN!!!"
"Invertin, you can go and save hm if you want but I want to survive so could you get out of my way?"
Invertin jumped off the cliffside and slid down.
"TIERGAN!"
No answer
"Where are you!?"
Still nothing, Invertin sniffed for Tiergans scent and he got it.. He followed the smell to...
"No..."
A pile of rocks was at the place the scent ended... A bit of Tiergans robe was ripped and caught inbetween 2 rocks. It blew in the wind dramatically. Vixen ran up to Invertin
"Invertin, about leaving you down here, you see I-"
She saw the bit of robe
"Invertin.. I'm sorry"
A tear ran down Invertin's nose.
"I'll be fine.. We just need to get to camp thats all.."
Neither of them noticed the rabbit on top of the mountain watching them leave...

To be continued....

(I know I said about the fight but I really can't be bothered right now)

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Post by invertin » Thu Nov 30, 2006 4:12 pm

I can't think of anything today. Instead here is a summary of the story so far.
1. Acrilox finds invertin in desert and beats him up
2. Invertin is found by 2 rabbits, he eats one
3. Invertn talks to himself
4. Invertin gets captured by wolf pack
5. Invertin escapes, beats up Ackrilox and is captured again
6. Tiergan finds invertin
7. Invertin find out that Ackrilox and Cresent killed Lobo
8. They kill a chainsaw cultist
9. They find Vixen
10. Invertin gets a flashback
11. Tiergan dies

If you have no Idea who these people are, read the story or the character descriptions (page 1)

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Post by invertin » Fri Dec 01, 2006 3:34 pm

Part- 12 The camp
(I'm still tired but if I don't start now I never will)
It is in the evening, the sun is just above the horizon, in the distance is a sea side town of some sort
"That has to be the camp, we've been going this way for ages and I didn't see anything else"
"Invertin, Tiergan was the one who knew where the camp was, we might have gone past it"
Invertin was about to answer, but he smelled something
"No.. It can't be"
He wagged his tail a bit
"Fishbait?"
"Who's fishbait?"
"He's an old friend of mine, he liked fishing, and swimming, mostly at the same time without a fishing pole."
Invertin sniffed
"He went to that town, he was here about... 2days ago"
Vixen sniffed, but she couldn't smell anything
"Why can't I have a nose like that?"
They ran to the camp,
Later..
it is now sunset, it took a while to get to the camp. A burly wolf with grey fur greeted them
"Invertin, Welcome! Where is Tiergan"
Invertin looked at the floor, Vixen answered for him
"He's, Passed on."
The wolf was surprised
"Tiergan? Dead? Are you sure?"
Invertin looked up again
"Positive, but first your smell is familiar but I don't recognise you.."
The wolf grinned
"Nah, you wouldn't anyway, I've grown. Alot, and I mean ALOT! Just a reminder, the one who howls to a new moon-"
"-Howls to a lost moon! How could I not guess from the smell, Fishbait, you have grown!"
Fishbait laughed then noticed Vixen properly
"Ah, who is your new friend"
He whispered something in Invertin's ear. Invertin stepped back
"Oh please, we're just friends, I only met her a few days ago. Besides-"
Invertin whispered something back
"A fox!? I thought they were extinct"
Vixen looked surprised
"Extinct?"
"Haven't you heard? Their main camp was destroyed, no survivors."
Vixen was shocked, instead of crying, like anyone else would she pulled a knife out of her pocket.
"Tell me who it was...."
She flourished the knife
"So he can catch my knife with their ribcage"

To be continued.....

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Post by The_Architect » Sun Dec 03, 2006 7:06 pm

yep, if I knew how to do dialogues, I could do that, but I dont know how. Every time I try, they dialogue thing pops up, but I dont know what to do from there. And when I load the map, It crashes! :evil: :evil:

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Post by Colicedus » Sun Dec 03, 2006 7:50 pm

I anticipate the next Chapter. I know were this is going, and this is interesting. I kinda feel sorry for what's going to happen to Vixen and i cant find the Right Emotican for the Situation.

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Post by invertin » Mon Dec 04, 2006 11:49 am

(Uh oh, this crossover means being nice to one side is being mean to the other! I WANT BOTH TO WIN!)
Part- 13 It's the unlucky number

It is nightime, Vixen is having a restless night, thinking about the attack on her village, why couldn't she be there? Why did she have to leave? If she had stayed she might have been able to stop them. But no, she ran off to do her own thing. Meanwhile Invertin is awake, he can't sleep, something doesn't seem right, and he can smell something lingering in the air.
"What is that?.... It's living, it doesn't smell like rabbits, it smells like, metal, living metal? No. Hang on, metal. Who uses lots of metal?"
Invertin shouted
"EVERYONE WAKE UP, CHAINSAW CULTISTS COMING THIS WAY!"
Everyone woke up and ran to the watch tower
"Hmm.. I can't see anything.."
"Can't you smell it? Soemthing is moving, and it smells like metal. Who uses alot of metal?"
Fishbait looked at Invertin and put his oversized paw on his shoulder
"Your just tired, go to sleep."
Everyone went back to their homes except invertin, who stayed there. He was sure it was chainsaw cultists. He could even see them in the distance.
"OK THIS TIME I'M SURE ITS CHAIN-"
"GO TO BED INVERTIN!"
"I REALLY CAN SEE THE-"
"WELL I CAN'T GO TO BED!"
Meanwhile, to the drillers
Slade is signalling to stop
"Why are we stopping? They-"
"They have a watch dog, we want the element of surprise."
Later, back at the camp, Invertin was convinced they weren't coming, so he went to bed, but he still couldn't sleep, he tried and tried but in the end he just sat on his bed and thought. Slade snuck round the camp, everyone had picked a target, he noticed 2 houses which no-one had covered, he noticed the wolf was awake in one.
"Staying up late? You need your rest."
Slade snuck into the other house, he looked at his kill, and found. A sleeping female wolf, no, not a wolf a fox!
Meanwhile
Invertin looked out his window, everything seemed quiet and peaceful, he looked across at Vixens house, he saw a rabbit standing over her
"INTRUDERS!"
Everyone woke up .Slade tried to stab Vixen as she lay on the bed but she grabbed it just under the spinning bit and pushed him away, she got up and threw her knife, which Slade blocked with his Drill. He charged at her, but she disarmed him (Like the sword disarm) He slammed into the wall, Vixen didn't know how to work the powerdrill, so she just threw it down the stairs. Slade roundhouse kicked her but she ducked under it and clawed his leg, then she got up and slashed his face, that ripped his mask. Slade legswept her then grabbed a lamp from the bedside and smacked her in the face with it, knocking her out.
"That wasn't so bad, now to help the others"
Meanwhile outside, Fishbait and Invertin were back to back, fighting the drillers
"Great day for a little fun isn't it?"
A driller charged towards Invertin who jumped out of the wayfor Fishbait to legsweep the driller
"Yep, those are weird chainsaws though don't you think?"
Both of them ducked as a driller tried to rabbit kick them, he flew over and crashed into a friend.
"They don't look very saw-like, maybye its a new kind?"
3 drillers charged at them at once, Invertin and fishbait jumped over them and landed on 2 other drillers, more came, this time there were loads, Slade joined them.
"Invertin, you have to run."
"What? No, I'm not losing another friend"
"Invertin, I'm not giving you a choice. Run, now, or I'll make you!"
Are you threataning me? You couldn't beat me if you had a-"
Fishbait grabbed Invertin and threw him, he landed next to the furthest house.
"No! FISHBAIT!"
Invertin watched as the drills tore him apart, they turned there atention to Invertin, fortuanatly he had already ran away. Slade looked at the exit in anger
"Darn, still, we beat them, and we have a prisoner. Get some rope and a bag"
Later, where Invertin now is (West of the camp)
"I've lost my family, my friends, and my life. But I will not lose my hope!"
He walks off, not noticing the dark shape following him.

(To be continued)
(Invertin is followed by mysterious rabbit alot isn't he? Don't worry, both are the same person who will be revealed at the end.)

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Post by invertin » Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:20 am

(My avatar would look really cool if it was 3D. NEXT PART!)
Part- 14 Crossed paths

Invertin is walking west. Trying to get the image of Fishbait being turned into furry confetti out of his mind.
"Atleast Vixen will be-"
Invertin stopped, then ran back to the camp, he searched her house but it was empty, he found a bit of blood on the floor, he picked up a scent, it wasn't Vixen, it was Slade.
"..He beat her up.. But she was still alive... He ran outside, then came pack in and-"
Invertin took a big sniff
"Rope, he tied her up and... Then the scent goes west."
Invertin knew what to do, he followed the scent of Slade for days and for miles.
"The scent is getting stronger.. Hang on, whats that?"
Invertin noticed the smell was extremely strong here, either he had set up camp along the way, which seemed unlikely, or he was nearby.
"I know your there, where is my friend!?"
He heard a laugh
"She'll be fine, don't worry about that.. My marauders are taking good care of her."
"Who are you?"
"I am Lord Slade, leader of the drillers, discoverer of the holy drill, and you, are an enemy."
Slade jumped out at him and tried to stab him, but Invertin jumped out of the way and kicked Slade in the face, Slade turned to him and charged at him, once again Invertin jumpd out of the way, only to be met by Slades foot (Slade charged at him and expected the dodge, so he dropped his drill and kicked him while flipping) Slade landed on his feet, but Invertin landed on his face. Slade put away his powerdrill and pulled out a hand-drill, then attacked Invertin several times. Only once did he hit him, but when he did, it hurt.
"..What is that thing?"
The hand drill stopped spinning and Slade started to clean the blood off
"Just a little hand-drill"
Invertin tried to kick him while he was cleaning it but Slade threw the hand-drill up in the air, then jumped over and on top of Invertin, then kicked him while he was down, and caught his drill again. He confidently put away his drill and left Invertin for the vultures.

(Shorter than normal. Still, that fight is what the first fight should have been like.)
(To be continued)

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Post by invertin » Thu Dec 07, 2006 11:35 am

(GAH! No! Don't fall down the forums! STAY UP TOPIC! *Grabs topic and uses "Post reply" Elevator to get it back up... Right, anyway.)
Part- 15 The Council

"Awake, wolf."
Invertin opened his eyes, it was midday. He looked to see who had spoken, it was a rabbit in robes alot like Tiergans except these were red.
"What?"
"A signal."
"To who?"
"The Council"
"The council?"
"Yes, I am Varex, the red. And Tiergan was the black."
"Why didn't he tell me?"
"We didn't think you should know, but some recent events have changed our minds about that."
"How many are there?"
Hiriad handed him a scroll
"This should explain everything"

Members
Tiergan the black (Now deceased)
Hiraid the white
Varex the red (Brother of Zarex)
Zarex the blue (Brother of Varex)
Terragon the green
Zinic the orange
Vanilla the pink (Now deceased)

Materials
Smoke powder- Delicate, will turn create smoke when shaken
Powdered fire- Explodes when hit with great force
Liquid light- A mixture of powdered fire, smoke powder, and water. creates a bright light when it comes into contact with rock, soil, or sand
Sound rock- An odd thing, when hit hard, it will vibrate and create a loud boom noise.
Dragon powder- When burned, shoots a beam of fire into the air in it's respective colour

Forms
Orb- A glass orb filled with a material
Dragon- Coloured sticks with dragon powder in them
Pellet- An extremely small orb filled with a material, when used with fire it is good for lock picking.

Tools
Glove- a small compartment is fitted on the palm, to hold pellets, when used right can be quick and useful
Staff- a long stick with orbs attached to the end

Long live the council!


"Vanilla?.. I was the one who killed him."
"We know, but Tiergan still trusted you. So we still trusted you."
Invertin read through it again
"..You have alot of magic.. You are the council of mages or something?"
"We use magic but we are not born with it."
"Why do you want to tell me now? Why not before?"
"We have been losing our members, we do not want to be erased."
"So? What can I do? I am just one wolf!"
"And we are just 5 rabbits."
Invertin gave back the scroll
"..Fine, what can I do?"
"We would like you..."
Varex sighed, he did not like asking a wolf for help.
"...To join us"

(To be continued)
(It's my birthday next wednesday, so expect something good to happen to Invertin that day, [Or something horribly bad :D ])
(Edit; Now Varex's robes are red.)
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