Buried Ruins[map]
Buried Ruins[map]
This is my latest map, no screenshots cuz i am hurry.
This is based on level 1 from challenges.
Download it now from http://lugaruforums.com/buried_ruins
Now my trilogy is complete, The Doom Trilogy!
This is based on level 1 from challenges.
Download it now from http://lugaruforums.com/buried_ruins
Now my trilogy is complete, The Doom Trilogy!
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Euphemisms are for sissies with less than 1337 posts.
Part of being creative is being criticized. I know that very well. Now it's time for me to throw some punches.
There are different approaches to mapping in Lugaru that lead to huge success. From the top of my head:
- Following an engaging theme (forest in the night, oasis, ...)
- Making engaging battle environments (tower with stairs, labyrinth, flying fortress, ...)
You should choose an approach and follow the plan in the future. Some blocks on a hillside just don't cut it in my book.
So what you apparently did is you made the map and then named it buried_ruins because that's kind of what it could be interpreted as.
Why don't you do it the other way around the next time?
If I think of buried ruins, I think of crumbled walls, partial hallways leading into a wall of earth, plants all over the place et cetera.
The sky would be dark, view distance low. Fires are placed here and there, each surrounded by a few chilling enemies.
A pack of wolves is patrolling the place.
Now that scene would have gotten an A++ from me. The one you made barely gets a C-.
There you have some constructive criticism, I hope you can use it to your advantage.
Part of being creative is being criticized. I know that very well. Now it's time for me to throw some punches.
There are different approaches to mapping in Lugaru that lead to huge success. From the top of my head:
- Following an engaging theme (forest in the night, oasis, ...)
- Making engaging battle environments (tower with stairs, labyrinth, flying fortress, ...)
You should choose an approach and follow the plan in the future. Some blocks on a hillside just don't cut it in my book.
So what you apparently did is you made the map and then named it buried_ruins because that's kind of what it could be interpreted as.
Why don't you do it the other way around the next time?
If I think of buried ruins, I think of crumbled walls, partial hallways leading into a wall of earth, plants all over the place et cetera.
The sky would be dark, view distance low. Fires are placed here and there, each surrounded by a few chilling enemies.
A pack of wolves is patrolling the place.
Now that scene would have gotten an A++ from me. The one you made barely gets a C-.
There you have some constructive criticism, I hope you can use it to your advantage.
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I felt like showing you how much further you could've slipped into txt-talk hell.Doom could've wrote:ren_trn u r jst a pos so stfu an rdel ur oldr thn me arnd hre so gtfo im dng wht i no, dnt ned opnins frm 2 retrd gys, tht thnk thay r gnius.
*n the fture plz lok @ ur wrkz, thn strt 2 flm smbdy els* Thnk u.
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Okay, you're going there.
What does that have to do with anything? I'm also older than David. Age doesn't mean shit on the internet.Doom wrote: and rudel, ur older then me around here so gtfo...
Actually, you asked for it. I gave you my honest opinion. Just take it like a man, dude.im doing what i know, dont need opinions from 2 retarted guys, that think thei are genius.
Wow. That is uncalled for. Have YOU actually looked at my works? You'd shit bricks. Just sayin'.*In the future please look at your works, then start to flam somebody else* Thank you.
lol with that attitude, you're just progressing slower in life lolDoom wrote:look our lady lolrudel_ic wrote:bla bla bla.....w/e...bla bla
rofl, "ur older than me here" means that u have been on the forums longer than me.
ur comments doesnt hurt nobody, there are just blocks, so?
i do what i can, and even if i did good, this is what i liek. If you're so "pro" then keep making "flying fortress" and "houses" rolf, i know ur a damn serious ninja rabbit, so i wont fuck with you lol
ur comments doesnt hurt nobody, there are just blocks, so?
i do what i can, and even if i did good, this is what i liek. If you're so "pro" then keep making "flying fortress" and "houses" rolf, i know ur a damn serious ninja rabbit, so i wont fuck with you lol
man do it in the toilet not on the floorrudel_ic wrote:shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit
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Lol what's your problem? You're clearly more unintelligent than I am, and you're new to the forum. I didn't even insult your map, so why are you telling me to shut up?Doom wrote:rene_turner u are just a pos so stfu...
Oh man this kid is getting his panties in a twist. Inferiority complex much?
Then why did you make a poll asking for people's opinions on the map? I don't get this. You were pretty much inferring that you wanted people to comment on the map.Doom wrote:im doing what i know, dont need opinions from 2 retarted guys, that think thei are genius.
Oh sorry, I guess you just wanted "We love you Doom your maps are so brilliant please keep making them they're so fantastic" and anyone who says differently is apparently "retarted".
How the fuck did you spell "they" with an "i"? I really don't understand how someone can be this incompetent. If you can't speak English properly, don't bother coming on an English-speaking forum.
Lol. Just lol.Doom wrote:ur comments doesnt hurt nobody, there are just blocks, so?
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.. what is the matter with you people.snovy wrote:man do it in the toilet not on the floorrudel_ic wrote:shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit